Cyteen
Tuesday, June 24th, 2008
I have been reading my way through the Hugo award winning novels for the past 3 years. Cyteen was a novel I was always apprehensive about reading because of its length. After reading Downbelow Station and encountering Cherryh’s writing style I became even more concerned. Cyteen was everything I feared but it was also something more than I expected.
Cherryh’s writing style makes me angry, there is something about the way she mutilates a sentence that makes no sense to me. I don’t understand how a decent editor could overlook the low quality of this writing. Two quick examples, “You or I don’t have to have done anything.”, “They’re not a hell of a lot careful.” Although these sentences are not completely devoid of meaning they both really break my flow when I’m reading. To compound the prose problem, the novel was long and drawn out with many undeveloped and unnecessary side plots and confusing details that didn’t seem to contribute to the story.
Cyteen’s story was a very slow starter for me. I was more than 300 pages into reading it before I felt consistently motivated to pick the book up, but after that I was seldom without the novel. I thought that although the book made a decent political thriller it fell a bit short in the science fiction category. I don’t understand why tt took a setting at a distant star system 300 years in the future to conceive of a political thriller based around cloning. Why go so far when all you need is Earth 10 years from now, and then you would have a story with much more urgent and relevant underpinnings.
In the end I was quite captivated by the story, the way it build slowly and never slows until it all resolves in the final few paragraphs was truly enjoyable story telling. Adding up all of it flaws and flourishes I give it a decent 3/5.
